Here I am, I am OUT! Was I A mistake? Did I really take my momma nine months to make? This creative, unique creation she made, Will I go on forever or will I fade?
I hope to make a difference in my life before I leave
I’ll do what it takes to have the chance to change someone’s bad air that they breathe.
If I could go on forever, I would keep my past
And remember all the memories that I would like to last
I grow old, my personality unfolds and I realize how much my thoughts really hold.
Different is what I am, and different in what I think
I don’t follow trends and I m far from the weakest link
I think about love, and I believe it to be,
The most important thing in my life to my lover and me.
I think about how life would be if I was only an inch tall
I would have the coolest little house in a hole in the wall
I think about switching lives with someone else and how it would be
I would pick the guy of my dreams, and make him fall in love with me.
Lots of things run through my head,
This is only a few that you have read.
It is hard to believe I am 18 years old when I act and think like I'm three or so I am told.
I laugh at myself now as I did when I was three
I still love life, and I am as loving as I can be.
I still believe in Santa when I know he isn’t true
I dress up on Halloween and have fun just like I used to.
My friends and my family who watched me grow to this age
Tell me that I’ll never be different, I will never change.
I am tough,
I never let my guard down, and I won’t lose a fight
I am loving,
I cuddle with my mom in the morning, the afternoon, and at night.
I am crazy,
I run around the mall and scream things with all my might
And I am fun
To me and myself my life has just begun.
4 comments:
You are a very creative writer. Just from this I feel like I have learned so much about you. I like the way that ou can see the evolution of one of your stories or poems. You should continue to write the way that you do, and maybe someday youll get famous that way. You seem like you put yourself into your writing, and that is the way that you will keep people wanting to read what you have to say. you definitely have a gift for writing so don't let it go to waste. You could probably write a random book about anything and keep readers hooked.
i say great job on your poem. it was interesting and how most of us have the same thoughts. We all should think of life like this and value every day that we get. I also would like to compliment on how well your poem flowed, and you didn't loose interest either.
Tish,
This is one of my all time FAV. poems. I'm serious too! I love your beginning. You manage to make everything you write have a piece of you in it. You have a really humorous way of expressing yourself, and you are a very funny person. The rhyming is kind of cheesy, but you had a goof flow throughout the whole poem. That can be hard to do. I'm proud of you!
you are amazing. i love it. you are so creative boo. keep writing. keep me entertained!!!!
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